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Sprocket
07-26-2006, 03:50 PM
Add yours to the thread

I have the surf jones
I wish I could surf today
But flatness prevails

Madame of Fact
07-26-2006, 04:12 PM
Life is very good
With surf it would be better
Add a beer to that

Waterman
07-26-2006, 04:38 PM
i dont know
but waves are comming
so hooray for beer

14thStSurf
07-26-2006, 08:35 PM
Enough with the mush
Overhead would be so sweet
Heh we all can dream

Sprocket
07-27-2006, 10:52 AM
Haiku is structured
five seven five syllables
Not like waterman's

quest
07-27-2006, 11:20 AM
Pretty waves roll in
Looking for the perfect one
take off, bottom turn

Sprocket
07-27-2006, 11:44 AM
Paddle back outside
Large set looms on horizon
Caught inside again

Sprocket
07-27-2006, 11:45 AM
Drop in wave too late
Fins break free from the wave face
Get sucked over falls

Sprocket
07-27-2006, 11:47 AM
Glassy azure wall
Must pump my board for more speed
Lip starts to throw out